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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
thanks! btw like your gallery!
But onto the texturing!
It would be nice to see the flat texture(s), so I can see what's shading and what's shadows cast from the scene. For example - the 'drop shadow' that the front pocket casts on sweater seems rather heavy, but maybe it's a product of the lighting. Just color map, no specular or bump?
I think you could go to a bit more effort to make the sweater look like cloth, and the hair a little more like hair. It's a little distracting that the denim of the jeans has so much detail, but the rest of the texturing is flat by comparison. A nice reference is the cloth in say, Toy Story 3 or Up. Very subtle cloth textures or shader work. It would be nice to see the pinching of the cloth around the wrist in the texture - it helps sell the surface as cloth.
It's a little hard to see, but it looks like the drawcords of the sweater are thinner and black on the model? They really don't read very well, certainly not as well as the original concept art.
Hope these comments are of some use!
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